WALT: comment on class blog

Morning Mimosa Class!

I would like you to write me a summary of your guided reading book so far.

WILF: Can I pick out key information from the text?

Can I make my summary concise?

Can I make a prediction using evidence from the text to support it?

Always include the title of your book and your name.

31 thoughts on “WALT: comment on class blog

  1. In the book Bill was confused because he needed to use the lavatory but he didn’t know which one to go into because he is a boy but he is a girl so he went into the girls lavatory.

  2. There is a boy called Bill, one morning he woke up and he found himself as a girl with pretty pink dress. He don’t wanted to go to school. At the school, people thy painted him. Zhi

  3. There is a boy called Bill who wakes up to as a girl!Bill goes in a pretty pink frock.When he goes to school the teacher says that Bill has to go to the front and sit down because they had to draw him so he was very embarrassed .

  4. The butterfly lion Zion

    In this book Bertie had tried to keep the man from the circus from getting the White lion in his hands

  5. Butterfly lion-David

    In this story there’s a boy called Bertie who’s dad is a lion hunter,one day Bertie finds a white lion cub an his lion mother and Bertie’s dad kill the Cub’s mother. Bertie and his mother ask to keep it but after a couple days his farther sells the White lion cub to circus and sends Bertie to Engaland

  6. Butterfly lion-David

    In this story there’s a boy called Bertie who’s dad is a lion hunter,one day Bertie finds a white lion cub an his lion mother and Bertie’s dad kill the Cub’s mother. Bertie and his mother ask to keep it but after a couple days his farther sells the White lion cub to circus and sends Bertie to Engaland.

  7. The butterfly lion Zion
    Someone has ran away from school and has met this ladie that tells him about the adventure Bertie has had with the butterflie lion

  8. The Butterfly Lion

    A boy called Bertie lives in Africa (Timbavati) in a compound , he believed he’d saw a white lion but his mommy doesn’t believe him.

  9. The Butterfly Lion
    A boy called Bertie lived in the savanna (Africa where the animals live) his father used to work in the war.Bertie lived in a compound sourounded by a colossal fence.To keep the wild animals out.

  10. The Butterfly Lion

    In this book someone has just ran away from boarding school. Someone ran away to some old lady, wich was nice, and stayed there because it was raining and it was cold.
    This old lady told someone about South Africa and it was just like he was in South Africa
    In that story there was a boy called Bertie and he was living with his uncle and antie. Bertie saw a white lion with his mum and a cub.Bertie’s uncle shot the cub and the White lion cub is dead.

  11. Anthony Horowitz The Diamond Brothers Public Enemy Number Two.

    Our guided reading book in Narnia is about a 15 year old boy called Nick Diamond who at first was a private detective but he goes on a school trip and gets himself in trouble as somebody has set him up for stealing a jewel when he did nothing! Although it’s his own fault for trying to run away when the guards try to take it off of him. so the police where called and Nick decided to jump on the top of a Ferrari (car). He got as far as the m1 before he couldn’t really breath.
    By Ella

  12. Our guidid reading book is called the dimond brothers in public enemy numbre two. In the book so far, a fifteen year old boy stoll a special jewel and was about to go Borstal(which is a prison).

  13. The Diamond Brothers public Enemy number two. Author : Anthony Horowitz
    So far the main character is Nick Diamond, who is a boy he starts of meeting these people who are Snape and Boyle. After a while, Nick finds himself being framed for a jewel robbery.

  14. The diamond brothers in public enemy number two.

    Our guided reading book in Narnia is about a 15 year old boy that is in prison because he stole a special jewel and he was so close to going to borstal prison but he cant because he’s to young so he’s going to little prison! I know this because in the book it said that the police where called and it seamed like a big crime.

  15. Our guided reading book is called the diamond brothers in public enemy number two. what has happend so far is he is 15 years old boy who called Nick diamond ,who stoll a special jewel, and was a about to go to botsal (which is a jail). What happend right now is he getting chased by gaurs but he’s tapped by his own friends.

  16. The Dianond Brothers in public Enemy number two. framed for a jewel robbery Nick Diamond only fifteen he finds himself being accused for something he never done.

  17. This book is called the diamond brothers in public enemy number two.At the beginning of this book a man called Tim diamond sent a letter to the people that are reading the book.Where we are right now is where Nick diamond stole the jewels.Alicia

  18. The girl is trying to invent a big robot.
    I think the girl used empathy because she thought like professor Albert Einstein. She also used resilience because when the robot didn’t work the girl didn’t give up she carried on trying to fix it. I think the girl is going to carry on making inventions that no one have ever seen.

    Derick

  19. she is making a robot that will change the world fore ever .
    the girl used resilience because she didn’t give up straight away she stuck with it the job.
    she is going to use the instincts she used to make the giant robot in here lifestyle and she would also try to make the robot bigger and better and one day she could make history .
    by Zion

  20. David-Girl and the Robot

    The girl is trying to make a robot.
    I think she used resilience because she never gave up even when she was going to die she still went on .And she used creativity because she created the robot by herself and the robot used empathy by saving the girl and he didn’t know I think she is going to build him again but this time she is going to make him a friend to play with him

  21. This video is about a girl who tries to make a robot and then tries to turn it on. I think this is a good story because she shows resilience and keeps trying but unfortunately she does something wrong and the robot dies. I think it is sad that the robot died because she worked really hard and shows resilience but sadly the robot dies after all that work she has been through to make the robot.

  22. The girl is trying to make a robot. She thinks that she’s doing well but sadly the robot dies in the end. I think she was being resilient and felt empathy for the robot when it died. Well I hope she tries again to make it and hopefully succeeds in making the robot. The girl tried but I know she could do better with making her robot and have a better growth mindset. By Nyhab

  23. The girl is trying to fix a robot that she has made but it doesn’t work, so she puts the machine to full power and a massive explosion happens. Luckily, the robot comes to life and saves the girl by kneeling over her and letting all of the dangerous things go over him.

  24. At first he didn’t want to stay with his grandpa, then was enjoying there selves
    the dad sore them dirty and then bringing back memories his dad had lot’s of adventures with his dad then his son and his grandson.

    Akenti

  25. I think that earth was dangerous because in the clip the cars were crashing and it was to dust because earth was feeling sick and then the sun came along and help him out giving him trees, flowers, bikes and many more making it a safer way to live at homes. Also i think this is telling children about climate change.

  26. There was a lot of dirty stuff on his head and steam witch made him weaker and made him suffer, but then the sun help by using his powers to make earth more clean and there is no liter in earth and he was sad when there was a lot of liter.

    Akenti

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